WEP Apr 2019 – Jewel Box

This is the second story about Dinara and her pet shop, Rendezvous Pets. I wrote it in response to the April 2019 WEP Challenge. The action takes place on the space station Rendezvous, one of the biggest space stations in the galaxy. The shop provides pet care and grooming for the citizens of Rendezvous, as well as the station visitors.
“Dinara?” Corby, a lieutenant of the Rendezvous Station security and Dinara’s on-and-off boyfriend, stomped into her pet shop, Rendezvous Pets. His expression was murderous.

“Did you find him?” Dinara frowned. Her other current boarders—a big yellow dog, a small feline from Verga, and a bright lilac bird native to Rubius—didn’t give her any trouble, but Filo, the monkey, was a troublemaker. He had been lodging with her for a week, since his owner departed on a month-long work rotation on a mining outpost. All week, Filo had pulled one prank after another, and he did it so charmingly, Dinara didn’t know whether to curse or laugh.

She wasn’t laughing now. Yesterday, Filo had escaped her shop. He was cavorting somewhere on the station, doing something illegal… probably. Hungry and thirsty, definitely. And obviously in deep shit. Dinara didn’t like Corby’s expression at all.

“No,” Corby growled. “But he has been seen. He stole a jewelry box from the Mars Ambassador’s quarters.”

“What?” Dinara gasped. Filo liked shiny toys, but a jewelry box? Who was going to pay for the jewels, if the security didn’t recover them? Her palms turned clammy. “Expensive jewelry?” she croaked.

“Yep,” Corby bit out. “He hasn’t come back?”

Dinara shook her head.

“Crap! The Ambassador is furious. How did this hooligan escape his cage anyway? The cages are locked, aren’t they?”

“I was cleaning his cage,” Dinara said in a small voice. “He was playing in the pen in the back.” She pointed to the large fenced area studded with colorful playpen equipment: swings, ladders, monkey bars. “Will they hold me responsible for the cost of the jewels?” She couldn’t keep the tremors out of her voice. This Filo’s escapade might ruin her financially as well as professionally.

Corby swore viciously. She guessed that was a Yes.

“He was last seen near the docking bays,” he said.

Dinara covered her face with her hands. “If he gets on a ship, nobody would see him or the jewels again.”

“We issued an alert,” Corby said, sounding bitter. “All the ship captains had us repeat it. Some twice. They couldn’t believe we issued an alert on a monkey. Rendezvous Station will be the laughing stock throughout the galaxy for the next decade.”

Dinara moaned. Then she started laughing. “Station-wide monkey hunt,” she managed through her giggles.

“I might just strangle you and be done with it. Unless you come up with something. The entire security force is laughing at me right now. I’m the chief monkey wrangler. Crap!”

Finally, Dinara brought her hysterical laughter under control and gazed at Corby through her lashes. “If Filo hasn’t managed to get aboard any ship,” she said slowly, trying to visualize the schematics of the station, “he might fetch up in one of the warehouses. Maybe I could lure him out.”

“With what? More jewelry?”


She almost saw question marks forming in his eyes.

“It’s a monkey treat from Earth,” she explained. “A fruit, I guess. Expensive. I ordered them as soon as the owner left Filo with me, but the box only just arrived. I haven’t opened it yet.”

She heaved the battered plastic postal box from one of the office shelves and pried the lid open. Inside, clusters of yellow crescent-shaped objects, covered with waxy skin, nestled among the packing cooling nuggets.

“Are they edible?’ Corby asked doubtfully, then poked at one of the crescents.

“The owner said so.” Dinara picked up one cluster. “If you show me where Filo was last seen, maybe I could tempt him out. He ought to be starving by now.” She thrust a monkey carrier into Corby’s hands.

He took her down to the warehouse section. Cargo drones of all sizes, some empty, others buzzing under heavy loads, flitted along the dimly lit corridor.

“Filo!” she called, feeling like a fool as she swung the cluster of five yellow crescents clutched in her hand. “Filo, come out. I have a yummy for you.”

A passing technician in green coveralls regarded them with a smirk. Fortunately, he didn’t ask anything. When she heard the familiar chittering coming out of a hatch in the wall, she almost swooned with relief. The little monkey shot out straight into her arms, making her stagger. He grabbed the bananas, but Dinara held fast.

“Open the carrier,” she hissed at Corby.

He did. She shoved the monkey and the bananas inside and hastily locked the door. “We got him. Phew!”

“Yeah. Now go get the jewels,” Corby ordered.


“This damn monkey thief is your responsibility. Besides, I won’t fit into the hatch. It’s too small for me.”

Dinara glared at him. Then she glared at the hatch. It was too small for him. It would be a tight fit even for her, and she was half his width.

“Fine,” she grumbled. “Give me a boost.”

“Take a torch.” He thrust a flashlight at her and lifted her effortlessly, so she could crawl into the hatch’s narrow, dark passage at the level of his shoulders.

Two thin parallel metal rails ran along the bottom, bruising her knees. She muttered obscenities and soldiered on. It took her a while to reach Filo’s nest and more time to collect the box and the jewels scattered along the passage. Unfortunately, she couldn’t turn in the narrow space. She had to crawl out backwards, cursing all the way.

“I hope that’s all there is.” She rubbed her aching knees. “I’m not going back in.”

Corby was checking the jewels against a list on his com-link. “It seems so,” he said absently. Then he sniffed at the inside of the ornate jewelry box. “Did your accursed monkey pee in it?”

“Argh!” Dinara said. She lifted the carrier. Inside, Filo chomped enthusiastically on the white inner fibers of a banana. The neat strips of the peeled yellow skin fanned out over his tiny paw like a star.

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26 Responses to WEP Apr 2019 – Jewel Box

  1. I love this Olga. I am smiling so broadly my face hurts. And wincing. I suspect monkey pee is bad. Very, very bad – and hard to remove.

  2. Olga Godim says:

    I’m glad you’re smiling; that’s what I aimed for. My job is done.

  3. cleemckenzie says:

    Loved the monkey caper and actually felt for Dinara who had to deal with that scamp!

  4. Toi Thomas says:

    What a cute story. I’m really enjoying this and hope to read more of it. Too bad that cute monkey gave Dinara so much trouble.

  5. Jemi Fraser says:

    So much fun! Glad we got to visit Rendezvous again. I bet that jewelry box is going to take a LOT of cleaning!! 🙂 Great story!

  6. lgkeltner says:

    I enjoy these adventures so much! Running this pet shop would never get boring! As annoying as it would be to cleanse the box of monkey pee, I’d rather that than have to replace all those jewels.

  7. rolandclarke says:

    Highly amusing monkey tail. I always seeing how monkeys peel bananas in India – beats a struggling human.

  8. DG Hudson says:

    This brought a smile to me too, and I don’t particularly like monkeys. Urine on the other hand stinks no matter what its source. The idea of an impish monkey cavorting and playing with ‘his’ jewels reminded me of Curious George, a children’s book. Well done

  9. Cara Hartley says:

    I like Filo. He’s a sassy one.

  10. jlennidorner says:

    Ha! That’s quite some journey. I love how you put humor in this sci-fi. Made it fun to read.

  11. patgarcia says:

    Your story is so funny. I was laughing throughout and saying, go Filo go. You have built a steady rise of humour in this, and it is the humour that hooked me in to your story.
    Excellent job.
    Shalom aleichem,
    Pat g

  12. Oh, I laughed there at the end. Of course, he marked the box. This story is just delightful to read and I love how you continue to develop your main character here.

  13. Jemima Pett says:

    I love pets in space adventures – and this is an excellent one 🙂

  14. Nilanjana Bose says:

    Done with your usual aplomb, Olga! Loved the humour. Monkey pee is terrible – I know from experience (don’t ask!) but still a small price to pay in the face of professional and financial ruin. Glad they got Filo and the jewel box back. Cute and fun flash.

  15. hilarymb says:

    Hi Olga – yes lovely story … and I’m so glad they found him … clever monkey to have made a nest for himself. Stink – yugh … I can smell it here … that box will never been the same! Great fun to read – and well done to Dinara for ordering those bananas! Cheers Hilary

  16. Rebecca Douglass says:

    Love it! The twist at the end is perfect :D. Space Station Pet Sitter seems to be a challenging job, for sure.

  17. Such a fun story. I loved the bananas from earth.

  18. Thoroughly enjoyed this 😀

    PS: Loved the way you described an everyday thing as bananas.

  19. Hi Olga
    Naughty monkey. Good thing she got a shipment of bananas. Well written, I enjoyed reading.

  20. Kalpana says:

    It’s so true to.life. This is exactly how pets behave, down to peeing into in appropriate spots. Great story. Such an enjoyable read.

  21. Denise Covey says:

    Hi Olga! Another great episode from Pet Rendevouz. Love Filo and the bananas, but the pee is a little more suss. Glad she got the mischievous monkey back intact. I hope we get to read more of these futuristic animal tales. Do I see another book coming on? Such a cute cover!

  22. A fun piece. Filo keeps everyone on their toes. Great addition of humour within the sci-fi setting.

  23. rxena77 says:

    A very fun tale. I love your alien pet store tales. 🙂 My own entry was delayed due to a personal tragedy which also gave birth to the story itself. Sometimes real life is not so much fun. https://rolandyeomans.blogspot.com/2019/04/weprif.html

  24. Excellent humor woven into this sci-fi. It brings up an interesting point about getting certain food to certain creatures. Not everyone has such a diverse chunk of the food chain to choose from. Great writing.

  25. I love the included monkey image. This made me chuckle. Sneaky monkey in space.

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